May 8th, 2011
“Inanimate Alice” the story line was very clear and entertaining and really lead you throught the stroy and encouraged the reader to keep going. The back ground music helped build the moods of the chapters. The first chapter when the faimly was in China due to the setting and the music set up that it was normal for the father to be gone a lot, but not for him to be gone so long without checking in and left a doubt or concern as to if he was ok and if they were going to find the father. It also struck me as sad, the mother and daughter seemed diconnected from each other and Alice seemed very lonely. When the moved on to Russia the family seem to have become even more disconnected and Alice was an after thought unless there was a threat to, then it was time to take off and hide she feeling were not even thought of and that theem carries over to thier more to England. In England she was finally alowd to go to school with other children as she desperally she wanted, however she did have trouble knowing how to “fit in” with the other kids and she was willing to get herself into trouble doing so. The games embeded in the story were fun and did add to the story line . I am waiting for the other chapters to be published and hope that Alice finds more securety and sablity in the next chapters. I did like the story and the way it was presented.
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